Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Forums Join
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
E
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Four Ways For A Christian Writer To Win A Publishing Package HERE



The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge

BACK TO
CHALLENGE
MAIN

INSTRUCTIONS

how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level

ENTRIES

submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners



Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.





TRUST JESUS TODAY

TRY THE TEST



Share
how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Cyber Communication (email, IM’s, etc) (11/04/10)

TITLE: SHREWD SENESCENCE
By Lillian Rhoades
11/06/10


 LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
 SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 ADD TO MY FAVORITES

As she had done once a week for the last four weeks, Minnie rolled over, turned off her alarm, and slowly raised herself to a sitting position. Very gingerly, she lifted her legs, one at a time until they dangled over the side of the bed. She could easily reach for her walker from that position.

With little time to waste before her aide arrived to give her a bath and to prepare breakfast, Minnie, holding on to her walker, shuffled slowly to the bathroom.

Today was the big test. She must not be late.

Precisely at 7:00 a.m. she heard the lock turn, the door open and close, and familiar footsteps move swiftly towards her.

The day Rosie’s late that’s the day I’m sure to leave this earth.

The grandfather clock barely finished striking its half-hour chime when Minnie, with Rosie bringing up the rear, made her way towards the computer classroom located near the main dining hall on the first floor.

Good, I’m early. No one has taken my seat.

With a promise to return once class ended, Rosie slipped off to get in some early Christmas shopping.

Within a few minutes the room began to fill with students. Some stopped at Minnie’s chair just to give her a high-five. Others greeted her with, “Hi Minnie, how ya been?” Minnie always smiled as each student passed by, and no matter how painful it was, always raised her gnarled right hand in response.

It’s a good thing this is the last day of class, or I’d have to put on a boxing glove.

The room continued to fill, and all around her Minnie could hear snippets of conversation. Why not? She had recently upgraded her hearing aid.

“Our Senior’s Group got back late from a week-end retreat. I’m beat.”

“I’m SO excited. Tonight’s our fortieth anniversary, and John’s taking me out to dinner.”

“Hey June, I forgot. What time did we plan to meet for Bible study?”

Finally, the door opened and the instructor walked briskly to the desk in front of the room.

“Today,” he said, is the day when each of you will be given a chance to put into practice what you’ve learned during the last four weeks. Please turn on your computers."

Minnie reached for the button on her computer and waited for the computer to boot up.

The instructor continued. “Just like you did in your practice session, you must write a seventy-five word e-mail with an attachement. You will be judged on how long it takes you to finish and send the letter. Please do not begin until I give the signal."

At the count of three, the clicking began. Minnie’s arthritic fingers went straight to work.

She opened her AOL to the e-mail page. Her heart raced faster than her fingers moved.

Dearest Jimmy,

The other day, you asked if there were any computers where Santa lives. I’m not sure, but I’m sending him this letter, since you’re too young to write. In case there are no computers in Santa Land, I’ve asked him to watch out for my handwritten note. I’m sure Mom will read this letter to you. I’ve attached a copy of the Christmas Wish List I sent to Santa for you.

Love, Grammy

Minnie quickly moved her mouse to the attachment icon, waited for the file to come up, clicked on OPEN, and checked to see that the file was attached. With a deep sigh of relief, she clicked SEND, and raised her weathered hand to indicate she was finished.

All eyes turned in Minnie’s direction. She could hear the whispers.

“How did she DO that?”

As each student signaled they were finished, the instructor placed their time on the blackboard.

Minnie, at eighty-five (oldest student in the class was sixty), topped the list.

How DID she do it?

Minnie and Rosie waited until most of the students had filed out. Then Minnie grasped her walker and headed towards the door. Just then, the instructor, Mr Peabody, approached her.

“Good job, Minnie. Uh, how did you get done so fast?” Minnie held fast to her walker, and stood as tall as she could.

“Why Mr. Peabody,” she said with a wink. “You said ‘just like we did in practice session.’ So, I decided to send the same letter, and simply clicked on DRAFTS.”

Mr. Peabody’s jaws dropped as he stared incredulously at Minnie.

“Why, of course, Ms. Minnie, of course.”


The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
Accept Jesus as Your Lord and Savior Right Now - CLICK HERE
JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.


This article has been read 504 times
Member Comments
Member Date
Helen Murray11/13/10
What a delightfully mischievous eighty-five-year-old! I loved her! Good character drawing!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 11/13/10
This is hysterical! I love this gutsy MC! You dida fantastic job. I thoroughly enjoyed every word.
Jenny Litfin-Fulton 11/14/10
I love how much the woman's strong character and intelligence shines through in contrast to her more weakened physical state! I want to meet this woman. :-)
Noel Mitaxa 11/14/10
Love the life in this entry. Well done Minnie. You can teach an old dog new tricks!
Brenda Rice 11/15/10
Great MC. She showed lots of spirit and craftiness. I liked this a lot.
Virgil Youngblood 11/15/10
Old folks know how to "make do" and your MC was way out front on this one. Great story.
Rachel Phelps11/16/10
Fabulous! This is great. I love it.
Loren T. Lowery11/17/10
This made me smile. So, well written and a very real insight into those we consider older. Oh, if we only knew what was going on in their very shrewd minds. I also enjoyed the original approach you took to this week's theme.
Barbara Lynn Culler11/17/10
She was a smart woman! What a great twist to the story. Great job!
Brenda Shipman11/17/10
What a great story!! Vivid characters and setting, and such a clever "plot". Loved it!
Catrina Bradley 11/17/10
Ha! Minnie's a smart old bird! Great story - you kept me entertained and reading to the end. :)
Susan Montaperto11/17/10
A great story, indeed! The MC has intelligence, charm and wit. I never would have guessed the ending. Thank you for a very entertaining story. God bless your writing.