The Official Writing Challenge
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11/05/10
Wow, a full range of emotions are packed into this. I smiled at your creativity with "Creepy-Karl-er," and your metaphor with HS cafeteria as purgatory and gym class as eternal damnation is excellent. Your voice and tone in this story are perfect. The compassion shown by both Karl and Hannah is moving.
Wow! Wow and wow! I can't even think of another word so I'll say it again-Wow!!
Wow. This one gave me goosebumps. Very creative.
11/10/10
I love your title, so perfect. On the first read-through, I felt like the voice was a little over-the-top, but when I read it again, I recognized that teenager's POV. Well done.
11/10/10
Raw emotion, deep hurt, powerful imagery makes for a incredible, heart-wrenching story. It kept my interest (and heart) from beginning to end.
Congratulations for placing 9th in this level and 12th overall!