The Official Writing Challenge
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09/21/05
Thank you for allowing the reader to end the story, without giving us the expected happy ending. This was very well-written.
09/22/05
I like your style. Loved "he wondered if she were typing real words..."
09/23/05
VERY powerful! Wow!
Loved the title... beginning. Even though you don't finish... the title says it all. Blessings, Amy Verlennich
09/24/05
Couldn't wait to get to the end ... where you left us hanging ... but that was right to do so ... will be thinking about that for a while. Hoping that the title gives away the end ... i.e. that it is the beginning of a new stage of life? Well done.
09/26/05
Brenda, I'm just popping in very quickly to let you know that you were in the semi-finals again. You are an excellent writer and this was a powerful entry. I was particularly pleased that you didn't tie everything up with a neat bow at the end. You left it open and the question hanging - very good work. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)