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Love the title! Story wasn't what I expected from the title but yet oddly fitting! I've heard rumors about this place Rumors so it was enlightening to get an inside peak through Carson's eyes. You told the story well.

(Wonder if rumors of Carson's visit to Rumors ever managed to surface & circulate amongst his co-workers.)
11/06/10
Ok, totally unexpected twist! I'll bet Carson is glad he didn't tell his co-worker the name of the bar. :)
I enjoyed this. I suspected it was a gay bar but I also thought the co- workers were going to find out he went there. You took me by surprise. I liked the ending and the visual pictures.