The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a cute story. I guess I can't blame e drying for agreeing with Bertha she did crack open someone's head:)
Very clever recapturing of of childhood memories, from a point of re-entry rather than of reflection. For your sake I hope it wasn't a true story...
Good use of imagery here...I could see and feel everything. Poor mc, poor Bertha. Enjoyed the story and it gave me a few good chuckles as well.
Creative entry for this week's topic and certainly a picture of injustice encountered at a young age. Well done!
Congratulations for your high ranking!
Great job. Loved the title and the story. Congrats!