The Official Writing Challenge
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The image of a demon standing over Jeff's bed gave me chills.
11/06/10
Very vivid piece...very thought provoking, and a great victory illustrated against the powers of darkness.
This was a suspenseful story but I had to stop in the middle to laugh at the name Mita Bigjowles. Great job.
Very descriptive. Reminded me of Frank Peretti's style of writing in This Present Darkness. Good job.
11/08/10
Excellently written, very suspenseful. I agree. It does remind me of Frank Peretti's style. Good job!
Chilling, suspenseful, and ultimately victorious - terrific.
11/10/10
Dark, eerie but insightful that there is an unseen world busy and active. Yay, glad to see the Truth prevailed over the evil. Great story telling.