The Official Writing Challenge
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11/04/10
I love this story so much. I get great pleasure from listening to the geese honk as they fly by and rest on the nearby ponds. I even thought of doing a story this week on gossiping geese but I'm so glad I didn't. It would have paled next to your outstanding adventure. This is one of the best pieces I've read. I love it!!
11/08/10
This is fabulous. Loved the details and the dialogue. Great writing.
11/08/10
Extremely clever!!!!!! Loved it. Very well written. Great ending event, even though I knew it was coming, but it still had great impact. Superb last line that hit the topic square in the middle. I enjoyed the visual scenes. The dialogue was good. In my book this would do very well. Enjoyed my time with this story.
11/08/10
Very creative take on the topic. Enjoyed it!
11/08/10
Very inventive and a joy to read. Thanks for the chuckle!
11/08/10
You nailed the topic! Absolutely loved the title.
Great dialogue and flow.
Super job!
11/08/10
What a great idea for a story. I enjoyed reading it, though I knew what the ending was going to be as soon as you mentioned a dog. Poor geese. ;)
11/08/10
This is a wonderful story and your dialog is excellent. A very enjoyable read.
11/09/10
I don't want to "lollygag" and miss a chance to comment on this superb story. It has winner written all over it. Ditto to everything the other folks have written. I agree...even though I knew where the story was headed, it didn't take away one bit from the impact of the ending.
11/09/10
I love the title - just too funny. I loved the voices you gave the geese. Fun story!
11/11/10
Congratulations for placing 13th in this level! Yay for the goose story! It was one of my favorites!