The Official Writing Challenge
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11/04/10
The second last stanza has always made me think carefully about my actions. Great poem and examples that we can allrelate to.
11/04/10
The flow and rhyme of this poem met the topic head on. Great message throughout.
The last stanza was super powerful for me. Outstanding!!
11/07/10
Wonderful poem. Well said!
Congratulations for placing 13th in this level and 17th overall!