The Official Writing Challenge
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11/06/10
Wow, such excellent craftsmanship AND timeless wisdom. Your metaphors were perfect with the ship and the forest fire. My absolute favorite thing in this, is that you were able to rhyme "incendiary." I tip my hat to you!
How true! You did a beautiful job.
11/08/10
Great job with this wonderfully rhymed poem and the message it sends.
11/10/10
This is so rich. Worth reading again and again. A real treasure.
Mona
Congratulations for placing 11th in this level and 14th overall!