The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a cute poem with some great points.
11/06/10
Very cute. I loved the double meaning of "Please Hold"
11/09/10
loved the snappy pace of this poem. And it got to the heart of the topic in a cute way.
11/09/10
Great title, great message, enjoyable to read...a well-written poem. I think the verse with the five lines through the cadence off a smidgeon but it recovered nicely (but it could just be me too and the way I read it). The rhyme and rhythm were strong.