The Official Writing Challenge
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11/04/10
This great poem was right on target for the topic. Good job.
11/05/10
Perfect voice for the subject. This is very good on many levels.

Mona
11/06/10
Your first sentence set the tone for the mc's voice and the words to follow. Good job!
11/06/10
That first line just grabs ya. You have so many clever phrases and thoughts here. We don't always see the truth about ourselves. :) Great work!
11/06/10
Very enjoyable, although I cringed at the title. But, that is how teens talk today.
Clever writing!
11/06/10
The title is perfect for this great little piece. You did an outstanding job.
11/07/10
Loved this! Great job.
11/08/10
Great ending -- something I would never do! Good job showing that gossip is a temptation for everyone.
11/08/10
I note with approval the lack of capitals - though I do wonder if you forgot with Facebook!
11/09/10
So fun, and so true. I love it when the message is delivered with a smile. Well done!
11/10/10
I, too, cringed at the first line and the title, but otherwise I enjoyed this poem. You gave it a great voice and flow. Good job!
11/10/10
This piece makes your point in a very unique and creative way. The last line nails it. Good job!
11/10/10
Great rhythm and rhythme, along with a powerful message. You did a good job capturing the teen voice too. Well done.
11/10/10
I like the meter in this and the tongue-in-cheek humor. Terrific!
11/10/10
I don't like repeating what OMG stands for, but this sounds just like something an average high-schooler might say. Complete with lack of capitalization of words and sentences. ;)

It might also be good for a rap song ...
11/11/10
Fun, realistic and clever!
11/11/10
Congratulations for placing 14th in this level and 18th overall! Way to go my friend, I so enjoy reading your work:)
11/12/10
I loved it, and let me be the first to say I did not cringe at the title or first line. You are writing a piece from a teenagers mind, this is what they say and do, it's a reflection of the character not you. I know you don't go around saying omg or oh my god. It was a well written piece and I simply loved it!