The Official Writing Challenge
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09/21/05
Your phrases "A woman answered" and "The woman sniffled" seem to be attached to the wrong paragraphs; they left me unclear as to who was speaking. But I LOVE the punning name of your main character, and the fact that she finally acted on the Spirit's urgings. Well done.
09/23/05
Great! Very well done! I could understand her frustration.
09/26/05
Cyndie, just wanted to pop in quickly and let you know that you were in the semi-finals for the Hotel/Motel challenge and rated 12th overall (across all levels). I was judging all three levels for this particular topic, and you were very high on my list of contenders. I loved the twist - which of course really showed up what a dirty mind I have! ;-) Keep up the great writing! With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)