The Official Writing Challenge
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10/28/10
This is sweet. You packed a huge story into 750 words. I used to slip notes in my kid's lunch too.
10/28/10
I'm sitting here surrounded by strangers in my college computer lab and you made me cry! Haha, great story. Loved the notes and love the story.
11/01/10
You brought tears to my eyes with this one - such a tender story. When my husband used to take a lunch to work, I'd include a "napkin" note every day. He told me they were the highlight of his day.

Good writing!
11/02/10
Beautiful. Just beautiful. Loved your characters and the napkin notes.
11/04/10
Frances, you brought tears to my eyes too. I love everything about your story. It's filled with hope!
02/14/11
Hi Frances
I may be 2 or 3 months late (just catching up on reading) but wanted to say thank you for this wonderful story. Yes, it made me cry too - such beautiful writing. Thankyou