The Official Writing Challenge
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This is sweet. You packed a huge story into 750 words. I used to slip notes in my kid's lunch too.
I'm sitting here surrounded by strangers in my college computer lab and you made me cry! Haha, great story. Loved the notes and love the story.
11/01/10
You brought tears to my eyes with this one - such a tender story. When my husband used to take a lunch to work, I'd include a "napkin" note every day. He told me they were the highlight of his day.

Good writing!
11/02/10
Beautiful. Just beautiful. Loved your characters and the napkin notes.
11/04/10
Frances, you brought tears to my eyes too. I love everything about your story. It's filled with hope!
02/14/11
Hi Frances
I may be 2 or 3 months late (just catching up on reading) but wanted to say thank you for this wonderful story. Yes, it made me cry too - such beautiful writing. Thankyou