The Official Writing Challenge
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10/28/10
This is a sweet story. I didn't expect the letter to go to her grandparents, I was thinking siblings or cousins. Nice job
10/31/10
This message from your heart touched my heart. Very nice!
11/01/10
I could hear your voice in this, and see you writing it, too. I loved the clicking pen, and your own inner doubts. Your style was simple, but the words were ones I could understand and identify with. It sounded real, and no matter how well it does, I'm glad you took the time to write it. Good job!
11/02/10
The 'click-clack' is just the kind of little detail that makes this story stand out. Excellent.
11/02/10
I realy enjoyed the sound effects and the compassion your mc had in wanting to write the letter in the most effective way possible. I have similar sentiments about handwritten letters, especially when it comes to witnessing or sharing my heart. Good job.
11/02/10
This almost made me cry - I can SO relate! I do the same thing when I write to my family. Or I should say when I used to. It got too hard. Maybe you just planted a seed in me. Thank you for sharing what was on your heart!
11/03/10
A well written story that has a nice flow to it. It all went together nicely with a very good message. Great job.
11/03/10
I also like the click-clack sounds- I bet all of us sit there doing that when pen is in hand!

Good story!
11/04/10
Congratulations for placing 11th in level 3!
11/05/10
Congrats to you, my prolific writer friend, for coming in the top 15 of your level. :D It was a good week for both of us.