The Official Writing Challenge
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10/28/10
This comes at a great time as Veteran's Day is approaching. What a wonderful reminder to pray for those who serve our country and their families.

I did notice you used a question mark at times when it should have been a period.

The ending surprised me. I didn't see it coming at all. It's always nice to have a surprise twist.
10/31/10
This is so poignant. Cody's letter put this reader right into the setting. Very nice work.
11/02/10
Bittersweet ending! The standout sentence for me was the last one of the first paragraph--priceless.
11/04/10
Well done Stan. You've captured a lot of emotion and depth, and you've expressed it with restraint. This gives your entry a strong sense of credibility.