The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a good job tackling a tough topic.
I love the way you took on this topic. Very original and touching. I got a little confused on timeline the first time through, but this is a stellar entry.
A lot of gut-wrenching emotion in this story.

I was also confused about the time frame. A line between the paragraphs would symbolize that jump in time.

Great story- glad Anna was spared the pain.
Nicely done. Good title, great emotional bond, important message
One only has to listen to the evening news to see how timely your entry is. Very good story telling!
Great job. I'm certain your message encouaraged someone (besides me) today. Loved the ending and the triple tornadoes.
Very good! You took the ending to a place I didn't expect; that's always a pleasure.
Congratulations for placing 9th in level 3!