The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a good job tackling a tough topic.
10/30/10
I love the way you took on this topic. Very original and touching. I got a little confused on timeline the first time through, but this is a stellar entry.
A lot of gut-wrenching emotion in this story.

I was also confused about the time frame. A line between the paragraphs would symbolize that jump in time.

Great story- glad Anna was spared the pain.
10/31/10
Nicely done. Good title, great emotional bond, important message
10/31/10
One only has to listen to the evening news to see how timely your entry is. Very good story telling!
10/31/10
Great job. I'm certain your message encouaraged someone (besides me) today. Loved the ending and the triple tornadoes.
11/02/10
Very good! You took the ending to a place I didn't expect; that's always a pleasure.
Congratulations for placing 9th in level 3!