The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this sci-fi story. You have an awesome imagination. There's a great message here as well.
10/31/10
What an imagination you have! I could see your MC at the end of these rows of books, reading these letters. I enjoyed this journey into the sci-fi world. :)
11/02/10
I'm a sci-fi fan, so this really intrigued me.

I thought the ending was a bit slow--the information was vital to understanding your 'world', but it bogged down a bit. Could you have found a way to incorporate that info into the body of your story?

Great concept, and a fun read.