The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful. The poem flows so effortlessly.
You have the perfect title. Your words, thoughts, rhyme, and meter are all so very good in this poem. What a pleasant poem to read this evening. Very nice!
Very, very good, with lovely imagery and a perfect ending.

Tiny nitpick: be aware of the difference between whose/who's.

I very much enjoyed reading this beautiful poem.
I was going to say what Jan and Lisa said, so instead of repeating, I'll just tell you that I enjoyed your poem. :)

Lovely poem. How did you get the lines to show up centered?

I have kept special letters over the years. So much nicer than an E-mailed page!