The Official Writing Challenge
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I love it!! I'm so glad you decided to continue the story. I know that was a gutsy move. This is a nice smooth read, you did a great job. I can't wait to see what happens next!
You gripped my heart with feeling so bad for Rachel. I kept thinking 'poor little thing' and all because she couldn't hear. What a tremendous weight to feel so different from others that a person would feel unwanted because of it. I loved how Jim scrambled for his phone at the end. It gave me even more than a whisper of hope! :)
Awwwww! I have goosebumps! Great story and glad it was not too much of a cliff-hanger.

Please continue another installment?
10/31/10
Your title is perfect for this sensitive piece. It sounds like your characters have a very interested audience. Count me in ;)
11/02/10
Oh, how sweet!

I'm intrigued by the continuation of this story, but a bit worried that it'll no longer by truly 'anonymous' to the many who will follow Jim and Rachel with keen interest. (And I'm definitely one of them).

Jim is something rare in FW entries--a totally sympathetic male character. I love it!