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I hear about true stories lime this all of the time. You did an incredible of capturing the emotions of the MC.
10/31/10
:( ...so very heartbreaking. Many from that war were permanently altered.
11/01/10
Very heartbreaking and real.

I have a hard time with a woman who would leave four children with an emotionally wounded man who had held a gun to her head.

The emotional content of the letter is raw and gripping.
11/01/10
So sad...you did a good job expressing her anguish. I deeply felt it.
11/05/10
I didn't get much reading done last week, but just now saw this. It is well written, has in it harsh reality, heartbreaking honesty, and deep emotional pain. Great writing!