The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/10
What a beautiful love story. I enjoyed every word of this.
10/31/10
A good story and definitely on topic. I could almost visualise Iloku's adventures. The descriptions were very good, especially
I only have one negative thing to say... did you have to kill him off?
11/01/10
You've definitely got the fantasy 'voice' down pat.

I'm wondering how happy she'll be with all his other women, if she should ever get this letter...

This was unique for this week, and that's much appreciated.
11/01/10
I really enjoyed this story. You have great imagination that flows onto the paper with ease.
11/01/10
What a unique approach to this week's topic. Dramatic, sad, visual. Well done.
11/04/10
This was so colorfully written and dramatic. I like your descriptions and use of old country terminology. Good job!