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The ending gave me goosebumps!
Is this based on a true story?

Loved the line about a drawerful of bridal bouquets. :)
That is such a wonderful story. Excellent characters and atmosphere. I wish more time could have been devoted to the scene at Gram's house, but this was lovely.
You've presented a lovely story--made me wonder if it was real.
I enjoyed this story so much. You surprised me with the ending but it gives hope to many who think they may never find true love. Well done!
The unexpected ending made the story very special - one that will not soon be forgotten. Great job.
This flowed so smoothly, I really enjoyed reading it. Great message and great writing.
An enjoyable story with a great ending. An wonderful example of Christ's redeeming love and grace.
I thoroughly enjoyed this from beginning to end! A lovely read. I could enjoy a whole book with this plot and characters!
I love your title, and was fascinated with your story. You made me smile with the drawer full of bridal bouquets (that tidbit spoke volumes). I'd love to read the novel-length version of this! :)
Yes, I like Beth, would love to read the novel version. This is a great start to an awesome story! (It also reminds me that Rahab was in Jesus line of ancestry.)
Excellent writing - and I LOVE the twist to Whit & Sweet's love story, and the ending - Grandma's response to the unfinished question: "a forgiven woman".