The Official Writing Challenge
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09/21/05
I like this testimony a lot, and I like the frame you set it in (the requirements of the seminar). Nicely done. You use an awful lot of colons where other punctuation would more typically be used. Very moving testimony!
09/23/05
I can't believe I'm only the 2nd to comment-I liked this, liked your metaphors. Hmmm...this is the 3rd article in this week's challenge to mention 1John 1:9. Isn't that odd?
09/26/05
Hello dear Lois. Just popping in to let you know that you were in the running once again. I think you've either been in the winner's list or in the semi-finals just about every week of the challenge so far.

I have to admit that I know that feeling about being asked to rake over the past too - that definitely struck a chord with me when I read your entry. I'm with you!

Anyway dear friend, keep up the great work and hope to see more from you next quarter. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)