The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/10
This little family did have a rough time of things. I like how their faith was still in tact at the end of the story even though there were still obvious struggles ahead of them.
This is a great story with just the right amount of suspense. It was a pleasant surprise to see that he was away working. I thought for sure he was a solider.
11/01/10
I thought he had left 'um. Nice suspense and well written.
11/01/10
Glad this one had a happy ending!

I'd have liked a few more details to help me place the time period.

I liked your main characters; you wrote them well.