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I really enjoyed this charming tale. God does work in mysterious ways.
10/31/10
I could see this story playing out so clearly, and know God sometimes chooses to do mini-miracles to encourage us. I enjoyed your endearing story!
11/01/10
It is indeed a lovely story. Well done.
11/01/10
Lovely, sweet story. Really fine characterization of Lester.
11/03/10
Excellent story of how God works when we are at our lowest! Thanks.
11/03/10
I think this touched me so much because it reminds me of my own dad, stubbornly living alone in his creaky old farmhouse. The ending almost seems "too easy" but when the Lord moves a person, who's to say how fast they'll react? Great descriptions of the setting and the old farmer.
Sweet story.
I would like to see more emotion when he reads the letter and how he comes to the decision to move on.
11/04/10
A very good read that touches the heart. Excellent work!