The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/10
What a sweet story...there was so much in it...God's perfect plan, God's redemption, forgiveness. Well done.
This is a sweet story.
11/01/10
You wrote this beautifully. Forgiveness possible because a letter from the past. Lovely.
11/01/10
Sweet story, well done.

My only suggestion--this is a basic plot that's been 'done'--you're a very good writer, and I'd like to see you bring something fresh and unique to the storyline.

This could definitely find a place in a topical newsletter.
11/10/10
Forgiveness received and forgiveness given. A winning combination for any situation. You did a great job of showing eternal benefits of both.