The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/05
GIRLfriend! I love this entry! Thanks for sharing it with us!
09/21/05
This is almost like two different entries--both very good. I love the humor in the first part, and would like to see the narrative expanded to a longer, humorous story. And the devotional is very good, too...just has a different "mood" than the first part of the piece. You're a very good writer!
09/26/05
Excellent writing and very realistic.