The Official Writing Challenge
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10/28/10
Well written. Great dialogue. You painted a very realistic picture and topped it off with a super ending. Nice job!
10/29/10
Hilarious and well-written. You did a good job capturing the personalities of the entire family. The dialogue was real and didn't seem forced. Great story.
This is a great idea. What a great way to have a family night plus add a personal touch to Christmas cards.
11/01/10
Loved reading every word. Well done!
11/01/10
very entertaining, and a good job with the characterization.
Congratulations for placing 14th in level 3!
11/10/10
Your lively conversation is so real and introduces each character and their "issues". Glad the Dad maintained his posture with the kids. Good job.