The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful and I'm delighted it had a happy ending. I'll never quite understand what could possibly come between a parent and a child that would make them stop talking. It breaks my heart to know how many true stories there are out there. You did a great job with pulling me into the story. I even crossed my fingers in hope of reconciliation.
This brought tears to my eyes. I especially like the last line, where you draw the beginning and the end together in a sweet, restful, conclusion. Great writing!
You used a beautiful fall setting to express the father's feelings so well. The story's ending was worth waiting for. Good job!