The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/10
This was such a sad, heart-wrenching letter. You caputured the pain of the letter writer quite well. I could especially relate since I had one of those dads too. I like how the letter progressed to asking for forgiveness. It showed the workings of the Holy Spirit in this man's heart.
This is such a touching and honest letter. I applaud you and those that can stand up for their belief.
11/01/10
Well-written and touching.

Until the very last few sentences, this struck me as not a person who's looking for forgiveness, but a person who's looking for an apology.

This is very real and thought-provoking.
11/09/10
"Crying, I prayed myself to sleep". I love that. Usually, it would be "Praying, I cried myself to sleep."
I like your way better! Great job.