The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/10
Good retelling of a Bible story. Great job of showing the Ethopian's hunger and desperation for God.
This is a good story with a great message. Nicely done.
11/01/10
Very good writing!

Since you had more words left over, I'd have loved to read some of the eunuch's back story.

Your first few paragraphs were superb, and my favorite part of this entry.
11/04/10
Very descriptive and credible portrayal of this unnamed biblical figure. I agree that it finishes a little up in the air (instead of in the water - but us Baptists like to take every opportunity!) yet you have thrown some strong light into the story.
11/09/10
Your word pictures are wonderful. Great job of sharing this Bible story.