The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/10
Obvious: You're first to enter in Advanced. Question: How did you get such a wonderfully well-written, hilariously entertaining story done so quickly? If this is a taste of what's coming, this will be a great week reading Challenge stories. Did not see the ending coming at all. FUNNY.
10/30/10
Valentine's Day can be so difficult for those who don't have someone special in their life. You did a great job with this piece.
11/01/10
No No No. This can't be. What a dramac ending. I was so comfortable with the supposed happy ever after ending. I guess that means it is a very powerful story. Congratulations (I think):(
11/01/10
You really got me with the twist!

The last epilogue felt like an afterthought, and didn't really work for me.

I liked that you were bold enough to take this in an unexpected direction.
11/04/10
Very "Emmy Chin"-ative approach. Young love let loose and maturing. A good fun read.