The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/10
Obvious: You're first to enter in Advanced. Question: How did you get such a wonderfully well-written, hilariously entertaining story done so quickly? If this is a taste of what's coming, this will be a great week reading Challenge stories. Did not see the ending coming at all. FUNNY.
Valentine's Day can be so difficult for those who don't have someone special in their life. You did a great job with this piece.
11/01/10
No No No. This can't be. What a dramac ending. I was so comfortable with the supposed happy ever after ending. I guess that means it is a very powerful story. Congratulations (I think):(
11/01/10
You really got me with the twist!

The last epilogue felt like an afterthought, and didn't really work for me.

I liked that you were bold enough to take this in an unexpected direction.
11/04/10
Very "Emmy Chin"-ative approach. Young love let loose and maturing. A good fun read.