The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/05
You make an excellent point. As Christians, we should get angry about worldy things but we have become much too complacent. I will say that though the content is good, a little tightening up, and connecting your points more clearly might help it flow a little more smoothly. Just my humble opinion. Overall, good job.
Blessings, Lynda
You definitely made some good points here. God bless you.
02/01/05
Good - and thought provoking. You built your argument well by putting the petty next to the important.
02/02/05
Very good points, well taken.