The Official Writing Challenge
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10/22/10
Thank you for sharing this tender story. What a sweet memory to carry with you always.
Wow this is just wow! You really pulled me into your story and my heart hurt for the mom. What a beautiful bittersweet story you told.
10/24/10
The last conversation would be hard yet many would love to know when the last one is, so all the right things can be said. Very sad story.
10/24/10
Goodness, this is so sad, but the conversation at the end says what all of us need to know: love is the only REAL thing in a life well lived. So touching.
Wow. Very touching story. I've read several entries this week that could easily become novels. This one is no exception. Write it and I'll read it. Good job.
10/25/10
What to say when every syllable is precious? Love. That is the greastest, isn't it? You told that so well in this heart-wrenching story that makes any parent ache. Strong.

Mona
10/25/10
Ahhh...so sad, yet sweet at the same time!
Congratulations for placing 13th in level 4 and 26th overall!