The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this conversation. At some point they both appear to be on the same page but it's obvious their marriage is barely holding on. I liked reading their real thoughts underneath the words.
This is interesting. But I was pleased to see Harry's willingness to admit that their marriage needs some help and intervention. I also like your line about how their marriage is like the curtains - and really, as the reader gets into the piece, he can quickly see that while the curtains are the surface issue, things go much deeper.

I enjoyed this - good writing!