The Official Writing Challenge
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"Face to face with Christ, my Savior, Face to face--what will it be, When with rapture I behold him, Jesus Christ who died for me." That's the song that immediately filled my mind as I read the last part of your story. Now there's a conversation! Love the ethereality mixed with the earthiness. Excellent writing!
10/23/10
Powerfully wonderful. The vulnerability of your MC made this an inspiring read. Loved it.
This is a powerful story and speaks to the true meaning of ministering to others. Nicely done.
10/24/10
This brought tears to my eyes - beautifully done! It makes me want to hear the "rest of the story." No matter how tidy our lives may appear on the outside, we're all like Lou when we come to Jesus. Wonderful writing!