The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/10
Accurate descriptions of that cold, dark eerie island prison. Like how the first and last stanzas of repentance and forgiveness bookended this lonely poem.
I really liked this poem. It touched my heart. The descriptions of Alcatraz were quite haunting.
Beautiful. Poignant. Touching. Thanks for writing!
10/25/10
I liked the rhyming and the rythm your poem has. Good job!