The Official Writing Challenge
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10/22/10
Nice story. I found myself empathizing with your MC, since, I, too, am married to grunter who assumes I can read his mind at times.

Good writing!
You started out so light and even funny. I was surprised by where you took me. That's a great compliment as I don't get surprised easily. You did a fantastic job with such a sobering subject.
10/24/10
You made me cry. I can't imagine a good friend not sharing information with me like this. I can't imagine a good friend going through anything like this, either. ugh. Nice entry. Really.
10/26/10
Interesting story and very well written. Keep writing this good stuff!
This was good! I enjoyed it. I'm glad there are people besides myself who have a hard time carrying on conversations. ;)
Congratulations for placing 8th in level 4 and 18th overall!
11/10/10
I can so relate to this one. I also live with a man of few words who usually responds, "Oh, didn't I tell you?" :) You made this entertaining and poignant at the same time, something that is hard to do.