The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked what you did with this article, and the way you discussed conversation. You kept me interested all the way through, and you had a bunch of good insights.

Your style of telling it did seem a little impersonal. It would have pulled me in more if you'd showed me your struggles with laryngitis, instead of just telling about them.

Thank you for an article I could enjoy and learn from at the same time.
This is an outstanding devotion. You really made me think and I want to make sure my interest and questions are spoken with the right intentions. Thanks for the lovely message.