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I thought at first his wife had died and he couldn't imagine going on without her. It was nice to see the twist and to hear God's answer to his question. Nice job.
10/22/10
The irony of the "why?" question and the cigarette. God always loves and forgives, but the consequences of our choices can alter God's perfect plan for our lives. Great job.
10/25/10
This was a captivating story. Your imagery was strong whether it was the scenery, his rocking the chair, talking with God, fingering the cigarette. Well done.
Congratulations on placing 38th overall.