The Official Writing Challenge
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You did such a good job of showing all the emotions and doubt that Julie was feeling. It is a charming story with an ending that is just beginning.
10/22/10
This is a story that so many can relate to. Good job.
10/25/10
This was a sweet story. You captured the mc's emotions quite well. I like how she chose just the right words to say.
Congratulations on placing 31 overall.