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10/22/10
Great dialogue,easy flow to the story. Stories about Christmas are always heartwarming. No exception here.
Oh this is a sweet story. It went in an opposite direction than I thought it would. It was a pleasant surprise.
10/27/10
You awakened the "little girl" in me! So many Christmas memories...and great hopes and expectations. If only we could retain the child-like spirit of hope throughout our adult lives; maybe we wouldn't so easily be discouraged. Loved the story; you made it sparkle! Shalom :)
I enjoyed this. My balmy afternoon suddenly felt a little like winter. Great descriptions.
10/27/10
This takes us back to those magical times of Christmas as a child. Thanks!
These were always my favorite letters. I love your seemless style and real honest characterization. Great job once again.
10/27/10
You brought out the inner child in me. :) I enjoyed the story and am reminded of "the faith of a child." Very nice!