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Aaaah...definitely makes me want to go there.
Very evocative and descriptive. You probably don't need the last sentence; it's a bit of a let-down after you get your reader to imagine this little piece of heaven! You should write their brochure; you've done a wonderful job "selling" the place.
A little piece of heaven you have given us in this entry. Thanks for sharing.