The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful! I so enjoyed the contrast between the cruel master and the kind Master.
Excellent job creating this scene with description and contrasting masters. I loved the way you showed your character's believable emotions.
Wow it took me a reread to really understand it but once my fog cleared wow is the only word that I could think of. Beautifully done.
Wow! Surely you captured the thoughts of this deaf servant. This story wrapped itself around my heart, especially when the Master healed him, and he could truly "hear" for the first time. You so creatively spaced your lines, perfect for your title.