The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/10
Cute story! I doubt I'll ever listen to the "chit, chit, chit" of chipmunks again without thinking of George and Darla! Great writing!
10/22/10
Your title drew me in - one of my favorite musicals. Cute story. Poor manly little chipmunk. I don't think he's learned his lesson, though. I'm just saying... :)
I loved the tongue in cheek humor! You had me laughing at so many points. I admit zi was thinking squirrel in the beginning. I was close but the chipmunks were a perfect choice. Thanks for the chuckles!
10/26/10
Darned varmits! Helps to see the world from a fresh perspective! I enjoyed the view from the "inside-out" instead of the "outside-in" for a change.Loved the humor!