The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/10
Very unique perspective. I enjoyed the dialogue between God and man. I liked the titles you gave them, especially The Crown.
10/21/10
Good take on the sinner's repentance. You gave it a new twist; very interesting. Well written with only a few punctuation nicks here and there. Blessings :)
Nicely done. It had a nice old English yet still modern feel. I had a vivid picture of the courtroom and the defendant.
10/26/10
I like the courtroom metaphor very much.

Your meter was 'off' in a few places; smoothing that out would really elevate this moving poem.

I'd like to hear this read aloud, with the two distinct voices--that'd be really effective!