The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked how the MC cane full circle. My husband's grandfather died last week and I know how difficult it was on the family. You captured those feelings and did a good job telling the story.
10/21/10
Beautifully told and full of compassion. Yes, mothers usually do know but it's nice to hear it said as well.
10/21/10
Nicely developed story. Great use of writer's tools. You took me back to when my mom passed on and similar feelings arose within my heart for her. A thumb's up for sure! Blessings :)
10/25/10
This was well told and the point was clear. Some conversations are really imbedded in our memories, coming from the depths of our being.
10/26/10
I LOVE the way you ended this! So many writers would have taken the obvious way to end this, but you trusted your writing and your readers' intelligence, and gave us an utterly lovely moment.