The Official Writing Challenge
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The words you used were beautiful and flowed well. I could feel your yearnings and desire to see Jesus and have Him erase our uncertainities.
10/21/10
Well done on all levels...the message of hope is there, your rhythm and rhythme (sp?) are exceptional. Beautiful.
10/21/10
Wonderful poem. Great timing and rhythm. I loved the way you captured so many people's feelings and then you brought out the truth that it won't matter. I think this will place very well!
10/21/10
Some thoughtful questions here for sure. Well written and versed, combining many poignant lines. I think of meeting our Lord face-to-face, and more than likely our questions will vanish in the presence of His grace. Blessings :)
What wonderful thoughts are expressed here! Who wouldn't want this face to face confrontation? And your poetic form is perfect. I think you've captured first place in this challenge.
10/24/10
A beautiful poem that expresses a conversation I think we've all desired. Very well done.
10/24/10
Oh, this is beautiful and marks the hope we all have when we finally go home to heaven. Love this.
10/24/10
Absolutely wonderful, beautiful, emotional and powerful poetry (the best yet, I think).
My favorite line: "Face to face, it then won't matter." Hallelujah!
10/25/10
Great devotional poem of the hope that one day God will fill in all the painful gaps!
10/25/10
Yes! This puts a longing n my heart for that great face to face moment. I think it will cause all our questions to vanish.
This says it all: "Face to face will come the knowing,
Face to face He'll speak my name,
In His arms all fear behind me
And I'll never be the same." Obviously written from a heart that knows that is true. Well done!

10/25/10
This is very pretty--it's rhythm and repetition remind me of that of a hymn. Set it to music, if you can!
Really wonderful poetry with an inspiring message. I think this is your best yet!
What a beautiful poem expressing a Christian's longing. Thank you.
10/26/10
I was singing this in my mind to the "Face to Face" tune also. Your message is filled with comfort. I long for that day. Lovely!
You were able to set to poetry the thoughts that run through our minds. Beautifully said!
10/27/10
I, too, immediately started singing "Face To Face with Christ, my Redeemer." What a sweet, yet powerful poem! I'm so proud of you, dearheart, and the great strides you've made in your writing. God bless your talent big time!
I like the rythm of the piece too. Very melodic and ministers a good point. Great job.
10/27/10
Well-written and rolls off the tongue. You did an outstanding job with this one.

Mona
10/27/10
This is one conversation I don't want to miss. Great job!
Congratulations for placing 12th in level 3 and 25 overall!