The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/05
I love how you tied in the aspect of being clean. Beautiful.
09/21/05
Wonderful, well-written story. There are several sentences that need commas, but that's a minor detail. You've done a great job of showing us Jessica's desperation.
09/22/05
Made me cry. Excellent.
09/22/05
Very touching. Well done.
09/22/05
Really good! Held me till the end..... and believable. Great job!
09/22/05
Wonderful. An enjoyable read.
09/23/05
Great entry. Jessica's need to feel again was answered right there in the Bible.
09/23/05
Great illustration of how God works in mysterious and subtle ways sometimes! Nice flow, making an easy read.
09/23/05
I got chills when I finished this one - wonderfully done!
Very well done. I liked the link between the two stories. Thanks for sharing.
The story holds the reader's interest until the end. The main impact for me is how important it is to be obedient.