The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful--excellent word pictures and the creative format emphasized the feelings. I'm glad it ended with hope.
Creative formatting gave strength to this lovely poem. Its highs and lows were felt while a sense of peace draped over the concluding stanza. Liked this a lot.
There seemed to be a natural rhythm to the formatting of this poem that the reader is lulled into a certain peacefulness. Yet the journey of the words are emotional and turbulent - searching, falling. But still an assurednes that the author knows what they are doing - where they are headed and the outcome will be okay - and it was indeed, exceedingly so.
Oh my! I just SO loved and enjoyed each word! Awesome prose -- just awesome. It has everything. Great work!
Wow this is so creative it really touched my heart.
So very creative and with an awesome message.
Oh, I really, really like this. I love the "echos" especially!
The imagery in your poem is awesome. I like reading it so much. It captures that cry in the dark of a lost person seeking God's deliverance. You are truly a creative poet.
Very creative. Beautiful.
I love the out-of-the-box approach and format which really enriched the experience. Well done.
I love the way that your format fit with your piece. Wonderful!
Fabulous! The creative format is very effective in delivering the emotions of your message. I felt your words echoing in my own inner person. Love it.
Congratulations on you EC!
I sort of suspected this would place high. It is certainly deserving. Sir William, the Poet. Kind of has a nice ring to it. Bravo and congratulations, Bill.
Ah, this is wonderful. I love the use of "Echoes" It lends a different dimension to this.

Congrats! ^_^