The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/10
This is beautiful--excellent word pictures and the creative format emphasized the feelings. I'm glad it ended with hope.
09/16/10
Creative formatting gave strength to this lovely poem. Its highs and lows were felt while a sense of peace draped over the concluding stanza. Liked this a lot.
There seemed to be a natural rhythm to the formatting of this poem that the reader is lulled into a certain peacefulness. Yet the journey of the words are emotional and turbulent - searching, falling. But still an assurednes that the author knows what they are doing - where they are headed and the outcome will be okay - and it was indeed, exceedingly so.
09/17/10
Oh my! I just SO loved and enjoyed each word! Awesome prose -- just awesome. It has everything. Great work!
Wow this is so creative it really touched my heart.
So very creative and with an awesome message.
09/20/10
Oh, I really, really like this. I love the "echos" especially!
09/21/10
The imagery in your poem is awesome. I like reading it so much. It captures that cry in the dark of a lost person seeking God's deliverance. You are truly a creative poet.
Very creative. Beautiful.
09/21/10
Beautiful.
I love the out-of-the-box approach and format which really enriched the experience. Well done.
09/22/10
I love the way that your format fit with your piece. Wonderful!
09/22/10
Fabulous! The creative format is very effective in delivering the emotions of your message. I felt your words echoing in my own inner person. Love it.
09/23/10
WOW!
09/23/10
Congratulations on you EC!
I sort of suspected this would place high. It is certainly deserving. Sir William, the Poet. Kind of has a nice ring to it. Bravo and congratulations, Bill.
09/23/10
Ah, this is wonderful. I love the use of "Echoes" It lends a different dimension to this.

Congrats! ^_^